Compared to my other speeches I have continued to improve.
As I was not relying on slides as I did in other presentations but I still need
to check on my time and stop with the “uhms.”
Start:
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I started off right by getting away from
screen but then I resorted to that position again so need to find a place away
from monitor to not rely on PowerPoint.
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I need to practice more on presenting and
keeping track of time. Practice to someone or in front of a mirror so I feel
like it’s the real thing. Put a timer so I know I’m on track. I was over the time
limit and I had a couple of important things I still needed to say.
·
I need to feel confident when I present. I
felt confident because I knew what I was talking about but I felt nervous being
in front of everyone.
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Paying more attention to time. I was so
concentrated on getting my speech done I did not pay attention to the time and went
over so I did not actually finish it correctly and caused me to missed an
important part. I am depending on a minute per slide but because im am trying
to remember everything I go slower.
·
I need to start making more eye contact
with the audience while it was a bit nerve wrecking to look at people while you
presented I still need to focus on my audience and give the presentation to
them rather that floor.
·
I need to change my voice throughout the speech.
I used the same tone throughout this one and having different sounds and tone
would make it more exciting.
·
I need to control my hands I was playing
with them while I presented to relax but that made me look more nervous and
unprofessional.
·
I should meet all the guides on the rubric
to have an effective presentation. I missed explicitly saying the “moves” of my
speech which cost me points although I did present hem. By being organized I
could have met this criteria.
Stop:
·
I need to stop Using “UHM”!! This is a big
one as I used it several times throughout my presentation and disrupted it from
having it flow.
·
I need to stop being so still and not
having any body language or engaging gestures that made the audience listen to
me.
·
I need to stop relying on the PowerPoint.
While I had practiced several times before I felt I was looking at my monitor
more than I should have.
·
I need to stop leaving out parts of my
speech, especially parts that I have practiced.
·
I need to stop getting a wave of anxiety
prior to going up to do my speech. However I think it really helped that I went
first because I didn’t get as nervous as the last presentation waiting for
everyone to present.
Continue:
·
I improved in many aspects so I should
continue to do that. Knowing my topic rather than memorizing it was something
that helped.
·
I had a loud voice that my audience could
hear what I was saying this was good.
·
I should continue to put an emphasizes on
certain words that way it lets my audience know I want them to know that was an
important part of my speech.
·
I should continue in making my
presentations clear. My objective and purpose was clear, while I did not meet
other expectation this was something that was clear.
·
I should continue to adapt my language to
the audience I am presenting to. While this presentation was easier because I
was sharing with classmates I didn’t change much but I should consider it for
other times.
·
I should continue being prepared for my
speeches by doing the background research on the subject I was presenting.
While I did know part of it already I still researched more on it to make sure.
Classmate’s
moves
Canyon always does a great presentation he changed his
tone in several occasions regarding what he was presenting. Showed evidence on
a very radical choice that made it credible.
Ryan presented on a topic that was also radical and he
knew his presentation which made it better. He did not have to rely on his PowerPoint.
Ling put passion into her presentation and did an
excellent job in setting up the presentation and how it was organized.
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